Oh,
let us
to Feel
the smell
of maple tree...
Oh,
let us
To feel
the scent
of pine tree,
Burning...
Oh,
let us
To see
The water
And it's edge...
Oh,
let us
Be Broad,
and by the time,
a river...
Oh,
let us
to fill
Ourselves
by roars and moans...
Oh,
let us
to Look...
and, Oh,
let us
to Touch...
and, Oh,
let us
adore
The red, The Red, The RED
Of roses - Rose-red, rose's red and it's insides and them...
Oh,
let us
to be
the red...
Oh,
let us
to Be
deceived...
-Oh,
let us
Be covered by the hills
And, oh, let us
To be the hills
For those who will deserve it
In general, the best way to get my attention is to send me a note and ask me to read something and respond to a specific aspect of your work. I very, very rarely respond to 'please read this' comments just because I am so busy but if you write to me specially and tell me that you want my thoughts on a particular element in a poem, I am there. Eventually. I often vanish from DA for months at a time. Sorry about that.